D. Hammill's book is one of the best and very helpful when dialling in carbs in an application, or tune, not covered by the manufacturer. A few comments:
- not sure what you are using behind your carb mounting nuts. Can't tell if they are rubber or springs. They do look too tight though. The carbs need to flex a wee bit so they can properly deal with engine vibrations.
- DHLA-E carbs have fine graduated progressive circuits and fine threaded idle mix needles. 80+% of the time the engine is running, it is on the idle and/or progressive circuits. Remove the carbs, mix screws, idle jets, progressive access screws, and flush with cleaner, thinner and blow everything out (jets, passages, etc) thoroughly.
- not disconnecting the two carbs from the airbox does not keep the same throttle sync. Slight variations in how the carb mounting nuts are tighten will change the sync between the two carbs. After you sort out the carbs flexible mounting system, you need to resync the carbs.
- if you do not know the history of the throttle cable, just change it. You can make up a new one using bulk, teflon-lined, bicycle brake housing and tandem length brake cable. Lined housing makes a huge difference.